Stop losing free trial users to generic, templated emails.

Get them fixed by this time next week with the Trial Email Tune-Up.


Get your core emails rewritten with proven conversion copywriting principles to turn passive readers into engaged prospects. So you can finally stop wrestling with templates and endless ChatGPT prompts. And cross 'fix trial emails' off your to-do list for good.

The best part? You don’t need to rebuild your email flow or mess with new automations. I write the copy to fit your existing set up and design, so all you have to do is paste it in.

If you want free trial emails that actually sell your product…without spending hours agonizing over what to write…then this is going to be the most important message you read all day.

Here’s why…

Most SaaS companies don’t have the time or resources to create 15-email sequences with complex triggers and multiple branches.

(I worked in-house for 3.5 years, so trust me, I get it)

The natural solution is to turn to Google for swipe files or email templates. Or to ask ChatGPT to spit out an onboarding flow.

You plug them in and wonder why they’re not working. You make tweaks here and there but nothing changes. You start thinking maybe there’s something wrong with your product.

But those templates and AI solutions are doomed to fail, because they’re built on faulty logic.

Traditional advice says that onboarding emails should teach people how your product works.

But here’s the thing: your free trial user has already raised their hand. They’re interested. They don’t need another feature dump or product walkthrough. 

They need emails that sell. Emails that speak directly to their mindset, addressing objections and motivating action.

That’s why I’m offering an email rewriting service that turns feature-focused emails into persuasive messages designed to nudge your free trial users closer to buying.

Without spending weeks recreating your entire email flow or endless A/B testing.

I’d Like To Introduce You To...The Trial Email Tune-Up

The Trial Email Tune-Up is a done-for-you copywriting service where I rewrite 4 of your free trial emails to address objections, build urgency, and guide users toward a paid plan.

Full disclosure: this service won’t magically double your conversions overnight. There are lots of moving parts to free trial conversions, and email copy is just one of them.

But it WILL give you a clear, engaging sequence that meets your free trial users where they are. Interested, but not yet convinced.

It will help you address the objections that stop trial users from converting: 'Is this worth the money?' 'Will my team actually use this?' 'Is it too complicated to implement?'

Instead of generic feature lists, you'll show them exactly how your product solves their specific problems. Not with a load of fluffy jargon, but with real, tangible outcomes.

It will save you 3 hours rewriting one email, 2 hours debating subject lines, and endless Slack debates about whether you sound too pushy. So you can get back to the dozen other fires you're putting out instead of agonizing over email copy.

And it will finally give your onboarding emails the job they were meant to do: sell.

Here’s What Life Looks Like After the Trial Email Tune-Up

✅ You start seeing more trial users engage and convert

✅ You can stop second-guessing every subject line and sentence

✅ You can stop trawling through playbooks and prompts that produce the same tired emails every time

✅ You can focus on the rest of your funnel, knowing the trial emails are covered

✅ You feel confident sharing your onboarding emails with investors and your team

✅ You no longer dread checking open and click rates

Here’s What’s Included In the Trial Email Tune-Up

  1. I identify your highest impact emails


    You send your full trial sequence; I choose the 4 emails with the biggest potential lift based on open rates, position in the funnel, and current messaging gaps.

  2. You get 4 fully rewritten emails


    Not just tweaks, but strategic rewrites that match where your users are mentally: excited about the possibility but skeptical about committing.

  3. You get subject line & preview text suggestions


    Optimized to boost opens and click-throughs for each of the 4 emails.

  4. You get a personalized Loom walkthrough


    Explaining what I changed, why I changed it, and how each email fits into the overall flow.

  5. BONUS: Quick-fix checklist

    While I’m reviewing your sequence, I’ll flag quick wins like stronger subject lines, clearer CTAs, or removing jargon that confuses users—things you can tweak in an afternoon (not a week) to boost conversions across the rest of your flow.


How much is the Trial Email Tune-Up?

Well… ordinarily I charge $3000 for my full onboarding email service (which includes things like strategy, segmentation and multiple sequences).

But I know how tight SaaS budgets are right now, and not every team has the time or resources to overhaul their entire email flow.

That’s why I’m offering this smaller, targeted service for just

$249



If increasing your conversion rate by even 1% would bring in more than $249 over time, this is a no-brainer investment.

And if you don’t see higher opens and click-throughs after one month, I’ll refund you, no questions asked.

Why you should buy the Trial Email Tune-Up right now

This special $249 price is only available to the first 10 clients.

After that, the price will go up. Not as a gimmick, but because this is a hands-on, high-touch service. 

I’m personally reviewing every sequence, rewriting each email, and walking you through the changes. It takes time. And once my calendar fills up, I’ll need to charge more to keep it sustainable.

If you’ve been meaning to fix your trial emails but keep pushing it down the to-do list, this is your sign to finally knock it out.

You can keep poking at your emails, second-guessing every subject line, and wondering why users ghost after day two of the trial.

Or…

You can get four of them professionally rewritten by a professional SaaS copywriter. With sharper messaging and proven strategy.

For way less than what it usually costs.

This is an easy choice. If you want free trial emails that pull their weight, grab your spot today.

Here's what happens next:

 → Click the button below to make your payment and secure your spot (remember I’m only offering this special price to the first 10 people)

 → Within 24 hours, I’ll be in touch for a few details. In the meantime, you can forward your current email sequence to beth@paidonboardingemails.com

→ I'll review everything and get your rewritten emails back to you within 7 days

→ You copy, paste, and you're good to go